Today I had a tutorial, this didn't go how I expected as last week when I showed my work the feedback was really positive, this week there were a few things pointed out. The main point Jennifer made was the short pieces of text that went alongside each image was opinion and not factual. there was one piece of text that I was told works this was:
This one works because it talks about how the skin is effected and what the material used has caused the skin to do. Although at first I felt like it was taking a step back as I thought I was nearly ready to print I do agree with what was said about the text and will be looking to change them to more of a short statement than a creative blurb.
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